From my Antigua and Barbuda Pages - episode The Dungeon

[Joanne C. Hillhouse]

The dungeon was hidden behind more bushes, built of stone and brick and tucked against the hillside. Had she not had a guide, Nikki knew she would never have found it; it being a small dark cave, with two or three steps leading up to the opening. She got a chill when she stepped in – stooped over, as she was not able to stand all the way – and saw the dots of light dancing across the stone face. The place felt alive.

“What happened here?” Nikki asked in a hushed voice.

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[Joanne C. Hillhouse]

Thanks to you both.

[chris laro]

hey I just asked for us to be friends on this site Joanne. I enjoyed reading sample chaps of tanty and vere - love your use of patois, it makes me wonder to go back to my own use of patois in dialog and make it more digestible for reader. But I do love reading 'real' dialog in phonetics. Great stuff!

I hope we man collaborate on future or just keep up discussions. But if you ever come across a competent female writer searching for a  novel to turn into screenplay let me know. It's vital that 'delcina's tree' becomes a script. Peace

c laro/scott

[Althea Romeo-Mark]

Great atmosphere.